i've been eyeing this for quite some time now, and it was better than i expected! you guys have done such an amazing job, and thank you so much for bringing this over to the English audience c:
the art and animations were downright beautiful (need i say more) and the world built around the characters was so fascinating that it's easy to get hooked! things like the magic system, the creatures (i mean... vampires), the occupations, the baths-- the writing and character reactions make everything seem so natural and seamless that you feel like you fit right in after starting the game. it's not overwhelming and even becomes more intriguing as the game goes on. the journal was also super useful for this! (oh, and the first class assholes bit? that was hysterical) and speaking of characters... Renan and Ilyes, i love you everyone is so charming and their interactions with each other are super fun. the test/assessment scene and the one where Rave goes with "call him the runt" are my absolute favorites, i love these boys. Rave is the epitome of do no harm but take no shit and i really like the unique moments he has with everyone else (like being soft to Hyde aaahh).
keeping in mind that this is just a demo, i'll just quickly breeze over the few technical stuff i noticed (the points about the English translation has already been stated, so i won't touch on that): the menu/UI has a good aesthetic but the UI with narration (and scrolling background) has a different font and font size compared to the rest so it feels a bit out of place and inconsistent. there's also a small thing where even if Renan is your roommate, Rave (when talking about choosing a study... friend) still asks about "study[ing] with my roommate" so maybe a check at that part can be done? the music was good at being atmospheric; i'm guessing the times when it goes completely silent are placeholders for future pieces? it's good for scenes to have music that matches the mood so i'll be waiting for that!
i don't have a lot of predictions about where the story might go, but i'm really curious about the roommate vs study assistant/partner choices; it suggests that we can have two different people if we wanted, which means a lot of possible branches (boyA as a route and boyB as the disapproving/supportive roommate? cough cough) and i wonder if it'll have any influence on future choices or endings. hmm. anyway! i can't wait to know more about this world and these characters, and you can bet i'll give my support to the kickstarter! <3
Thank you very much for your much complete feedback! It help us a lot to improve the game. We have taken notes of what you said!
And as you could guess it, you can have a different roommate even if you are not in his route, which leads to a lot of possibilities! Thank you very much again for your support and considering backing us on our Kickstarter!
This looks absolutely amazing! I'm aware that your English translation might not be perfect, but it's not too terribly off-putting~ Anywho, I wish you all the best of luck in this and, if you can't find anyone to proof read this in an appropriate amount of time, I wouldn't mind lending my help. I'm not saying "add me or else!", I'm just saying that, if you can't find anyone, my doors are open.
Again, best of luck and this looks gorgeous already!
AHHHH U GUYSS FINALLY!!!! Id been following yall on Tumblr and was absolutely psyched for this game and now the demo is out HOORAY! Downloading it right now, cant wait to play! Im sure its gonna be awesome haha! Just wanna say i absolutely LOVE the immersive world you have built with the gorgeous art and intriguing plot! When you guys do get a kickstarter going im def gonna be supporting yall! Good job for all your harwork and efforts in making this game! <3
I know I will love this full game! The only thing is when it comes out and am not gonna extra sad cause I probably on't have the money lol but am gonna try out the demo( even though I know this is already an amazing game just from looking )
Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.
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i've been eyeing this for quite some time now, and it was better than i expected! you guys have done such an amazing job, and thank you so much for bringing this over to the English audience c:
the art and animations were downright beautiful (need i say more) and the world built around the characters was so fascinating that it's easy to get hooked! things like the magic system, the creatures (i mean... vampires), the occupations, the baths-- the writing and character reactions make everything seem so natural and seamless that you feel like you fit right in after starting the game. it's not overwhelming and even becomes more intriguing as the game goes on. the journal was also super useful for this! (oh, and the first class assholes bit? that was hysterical) and speaking of characters...
Renan and Ilyes, i love youeveryone is so charming and their interactions with each other are super fun. the test/assessment scene and the one where Rave goes with "call him the runt" are my absolute favorites, i love these boys. Rave is the epitome of do no harm but take no shit and i really like the unique moments he has with everyone else (like being soft to Hyde aaahh).keeping in mind that this is just a demo, i'll just quickly breeze over the few technical stuff i noticed (the points about the English translation has already been stated, so i won't touch on that): the menu/UI has a good aesthetic but the UI with narration (and scrolling background) has a different font and font size compared to the rest so it feels a bit out of place and inconsistent. there's also a small thing where even if Renan is your roommate, Rave (when talking about choosing a study... friend) still asks about "study[ing] with my roommate" so maybe a check at that part can be done? the music was good at being atmospheric; i'm guessing the times when it goes completely silent are placeholders for future pieces? it's good for scenes to have music that matches the mood so i'll be waiting for that!
i don't have a lot of predictions about where the story might go, but i'm really curious about the roommate vs study assistant/partner choices; it suggests that we can have two different people if we wanted, which means a lot of possible branches (b
oyA as a route and boyB as the disapproving/supportive roommate? cough cough) and i wonder if it'll have any influence on future choices or endings. hmm. anyway! i can't wait to know more about this world and these characters, and you can bet i'll give my support to the kickstarter! <3Thank you very much for your much complete feedback! It help us a lot to improve the game. We have taken notes of what you said!
And as you could guess it, you can have a different roommate even if you are not in his route, which leads to a lot of possibilities! Thank you very much again for your support and considering backing us on our Kickstarter!
This looks absolutely amazing! I'm aware that your English translation might not be perfect, but it's not too terribly off-putting~ Anywho, I wish you all the best of luck in this and, if you can't find anyone to proof read this in an appropriate amount of time, I wouldn't mind lending my help. I'm not saying "add me or else!", I'm just saying that, if you can't find anyone, my doors are open.
Again, best of luck and this looks gorgeous already!
Thank you very much for your proposition, it is much appreciated! We found someone willing to help for now, but we will stay in touch just in case :)
And thank you again for the compliments! We're happy you liked the game!
AHHHH U GUYSS FINALLY!!!! Id been following yall on Tumblr and was absolutely psyched for this game and now the demo is out HOORAY! Downloading it right now, cant wait to play! Im sure its gonna be awesome haha! Just wanna say i absolutely LOVE the immersive world you have built with the gorgeous art and intriguing plot! When you guys do get a kickstarter going im def gonna be supporting yall! Good job for all your harwork and efforts in making this game! <3
We hope you liked the demo! Thank you very much for following us for so long and for supporting us! We will do our best!
I know I will love this full game! The only thing is when it comes out and am not gonna extra sad cause I probably on't have the money lol but am gonna try out the demo( even though I know this is already an amazing game just from looking )
Thank you very much, we hope you will like the demo!
Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
Thank you very much Sia! We're really happy you liked the game's demo!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.