Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.
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Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
Thank you very much Sia! We're really happy you liked the game's demo!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.