This looks absolutely amazing! I'm aware that your English translation might not be perfect, but it's not too terribly off-putting~ Anywho, I wish you all the best of luck in this and, if you can't find anyone to proof read this in an appropriate amount of time, I wouldn't mind lending my help. I'm not saying "add me or else!", I'm just saying that, if you can't find anyone, my doors are open.
Again, best of luck and this looks gorgeous already!
AHHHH U GUYSS FINALLY!!!! Id been following yall on Tumblr and was absolutely psyched for this game and now the demo is out HOORAY! Downloading it right now, cant wait to play! Im sure its gonna be awesome haha! Just wanna say i absolutely LOVE the immersive world you have built with the gorgeous art and intriguing plot! When you guys do get a kickstarter going im def gonna be supporting yall! Good job for all your harwork and efforts in making this game! <3
I know I will love this full game! The only thing is when it comes out and am not gonna extra sad cause I probably on't have the money lol but am gonna try out the demo( even though I know this is already an amazing game just from looking )
Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.
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This looks absolutely amazing! I'm aware that your English translation might not be perfect, but it's not too terribly off-putting~ Anywho, I wish you all the best of luck in this and, if you can't find anyone to proof read this in an appropriate amount of time, I wouldn't mind lending my help. I'm not saying "add me or else!", I'm just saying that, if you can't find anyone, my doors are open.
Again, best of luck and this looks gorgeous already!
Thank you very much for your proposition, it is much appreciated! We found someone willing to help for now, but we will stay in touch just in case :)
And thank you again for the compliments! We're happy you liked the game!
AHHHH U GUYSS FINALLY!!!! Id been following yall on Tumblr and was absolutely psyched for this game and now the demo is out HOORAY! Downloading it right now, cant wait to play! Im sure its gonna be awesome haha! Just wanna say i absolutely LOVE the immersive world you have built with the gorgeous art and intriguing plot! When you guys do get a kickstarter going im def gonna be supporting yall! Good job for all your harwork and efforts in making this game! <3
We hope you liked the demo! Thank you very much for following us for so long and for supporting us! We will do our best!
I know I will love this full game! The only thing is when it comes out and am not gonna extra sad cause I probably on't have the money lol but am gonna try out the demo( even though I know this is already an amazing game just from looking )
Thank you very much, we hope you will like the demo!
Brilliant! I enjoyed the choices, it's not often a game will have choices that actually make me pause and consider what the best option is to take. The art is of course, beautiful and the story left me curious for more! I really want the boys reaction to being picked to help Rave study. I look forward to the KS!
Thank you very much Sia! We're really happy you liked the game's demo!
So far, this is game is amazing. I like the music, the art, the writing, the characters, the options, etc. It really sets the atmosphere and immerses the reader. The only problem is that the translation needs some fixing. I understand that a non-native English person translated the game into English - and they did quite a phenomenal job - but the game would seem absolutely more polished and be much easier to understand if small mistakes were fixed. Overall though, this is a promising demo and I wish to support you on Kickstarter.
Thank you very much for your feedback! We are glad you liked the demo! And, we will - of course - recruit an English proofreader if the Kickstarter is funded! Thank you for pointing out, we added it in the FAQ.